User blog comment:TheConvictsSUCK/Submit psychopath ideas!/@comment-12.157.146.18-20121212093120

psychopath : Jill Peterson, job hair stylist, weapon hedge trimmer,she thinks the zombies are people and she wants to give them a makeover. scene 1( Frank enters the salon- Jill-"Hello welcome to Jill's hair salon how may I help you"-Frank-"uww You there zombies outside right"-Jill-"What? zombies you must be jokeing"-Frank-"No i'm not but I can get you somewhere safe"-Jill-"But everything is fine outside"-Frank-"LADY HAVE YOU GONE CRAZY an outbreakk has happend you need to get somewhere safe"-Jill-"OH I SEE YOU THINK I'M NOTHING well i"llyou(takes out a bloody hedge trimmer) i"ll give you a makeover of a life time" scene ends fight starts) scene 2( Fight ends scene starts-Jill-"Y...YOU H...HOW stay away stay away from me(Jill runs out of the salon and trips and falls on to the hdege trimmer as she yells zombie come and rip her apart) scene ends )

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